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Soujin ([personal profile] psalm_onethirtyone) wrote2007-03-15 09:35 pm
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"I Just Can't Look, it's Killing Me..."

it storms

the cat and I
are unperturbed.
I read my newspaper
by rain-glistened
moonlight. In the
classifieds
we are exhorted
to buy and sell

Outside,
the stars bathe

[identity profile] prouvairesylvie.livejournal.com 2007-03-16 07:31 pm (UTC)(link)
Beautiful poem! I especially loved the 2 last lines. Such a brilliant, brilliant way to describe rain! (But shouldn't it be unperturbed?) Are you think of being a professional writer, maybe?

[identity profile] rainbowjehan.livejournal.com 2007-03-19 04:48 pm (UTC)(link)
^^ Thank you! (and yes. shhh. *fixes stealthily*) Nope. XD I'm going to be a collorectal surgeon.

[identity profile] prouvairesylvie.livejournal.com 2007-03-19 07:50 pm (UTC)(link)
(*didn't see anything*)Hmmm. That's interesting. (I had to look that word up in the dictionary and I did it all by myself!!)

[identity profile] rainbowjehan.livejournal.com 2007-03-21 03:16 pm (UTC)(link)
(thank you!) ^^ It's sort of icky-sounding, I know, but something I really want to do. (XD Oh, man, I'm sorry.)