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Soujin ([personal profile] psalm_onethirtyone) wrote2007-03-15 09:35 pm
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"I Just Can't Look, it's Killing Me..."

it storms

the cat and I
are unperturbed.
I read my newspaper
by rain-glistened
moonlight. In the
classifieds
we are exhorted
to buy and sell

Outside,
the stars bathe

[identity profile] prouvairesylvie.livejournal.com 2007-03-16 07:31 pm (UTC)(link)
Beautiful poem! I especially loved the 2 last lines. Such a brilliant, brilliant way to describe rain! (But shouldn't it be unperturbed?) Are you think of being a professional writer, maybe?

[identity profile] gileonnen.livejournal.com 2007-03-17 03:36 am (UTC)(link)
^______^ I love your poems. I also love "Inama Nushif"--it's one of my favorites. ^___^