ext_2813 ([identity profile] tiamatschild.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] psalm_onethirtyone 2010-02-07 09:54 pm (UTC)

That works! You could swap in 'distressing' a few times, maybe. Get the tonal shifts across a little.
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