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2010-03-31 01:16 pm (UTC)
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<333!
I can see why you'd change the line, but I actually like it the way it is--I think a 'the' would break the sound a bit.
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I can see why you'd change the line, but I actually like it the way it is--I think a 'the' would break the sound a bit.