"But the Best Thing About New York City..."
Eriiiin. I have two versions of the Vespers piece; one is a sonnet, and the other is a blank-verse anthem; they're fourteen and twenty lines, respectively.
You can look at them both and tell me what you think. If you like one or the other better, just tell me if there are any edits or changes I need to make. If neither of them are quite what you're looking for, just say and I'll work out another one. Don't you dare feel guilty if that's the case. :D I can do it.
I'll repost them both here.
( Sonnet: )
Note the iambic pentametre! I am proud of the iambic pentametre.
( Anthem: )
There! So tell me what you think. I still have some couplets and free verse ideas in my book(s), so if you need me to work out another one I'm prepared. <3
Thank youu!
You can look at them both and tell me what you think. If you like one or the other better, just tell me if there are any edits or changes I need to make. If neither of them are quite what you're looking for, just say and I'll work out another one. Don't you dare feel guilty if that's the case. :D I can do it.
I'll repost them both here.
( Sonnet: )Note the iambic pentametre! I am proud of the iambic pentametre.
( Anthem: )There! So tell me what you think. I still have some couplets and free verse ideas in my book(s), so if you need me to work out another one I'm prepared. <3
Thank youu!
