Yeah, that sounds good! ^_^ but don't change it solely on my opinion. The title of a piece is like its eyes: you can look into them and see the soul of the piece, but it might not quite be an accurate window.
Ah! Well, i thought that it should be changed to "that" because as it stands, it doesn't specify the same god as what. But, i could very easily be misreading it ^^;
That's perfect for the smile.
So is the threes ^___^
It turns out that the typographical error was the "her"/"here" that you already caught, so, yeah.
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Date: 2007-02-23 01:14 am (UTC)Yeah, that sounds good! ^_^ but don't change it solely on my opinion. The title of a piece is like its eyes: you can look into them and see the soul of the piece, but it might not quite be an accurate window.
Ah! Well, i thought that it should be changed to "that" because as it stands, it doesn't specify the same god as what. But, i could very easily be misreading it ^^;
That's perfect for the smile.
So is the threes ^___^
It turns out that the typographical error was the "her"/"here" that you already caught, so, yeah.
Most anytime, darling.