'our eighty percent' touched something true in me, something maybe painful to touch, painful to look at, but in looking and in looking back i see pain, but i see grace, i see honesty and beauty, i see forgiveness that comes not from society, from safety, from wanting everything explained and nothing understood, but from the tug of knowing (this is just the truth), knowing deeper than skin. and that's all rather obscure, but thank you for writing it.
and 'love song for a harmonica' is gorgeous and delightful every line and playful-sweet turn of phrase -- i like 'i will be straight out of langston hughes' and 'when your sweet mouth is kissing music' -- <3 this is why your crushes are good things --
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Date: 2009-01-25 08:35 am (UTC)and 'love song for a harmonica' is gorgeous and delightful every line and playful-sweet turn of phrase -- i like 'i will be straight out of langston hughes' and 'when your sweet mouth is kissing music' -- <3 this is why your crushes are good things --