"Years Ago, When I Was Younger..."
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Poetry.
Assignment: Write a poem using hard and soft sounds.
Trans
Most hot days I wish that I could crack that skin open
from inside
and climb out of it, drop
the dry wallpaper
and walk away from it--leave
it on the pavement.
If I stepped free from this false self,
if I slid whispering into my right gender,
if my smooth chin grew sparse hairs
and my voice fell two octaves down,
I could tell you I am not transforming
from one thing into another.
It was always me in here
enclosed in the wrong body, and
in these skirts and lipsticks
I have always been a
changeling.
xxx
Assignment: Write a poem using a made-up word. Do not define the word in the poem.
Paper Thin Hotel**
It’s four in the morning
the end of December,
the beginning of a better song by a better poet
but my heart feels gravel-rough, so
perhaps that’s enough for kinship
and I’m lying awake listening to the
gasps of fucking
from the couple next door,
thinking: at least they sound happy,
thinking: I could get drunk and forget this,
a cambrelin and a scotch at the bar
but then I’d have to readjust my eyes
to the light. Fuck that noise.
New York is cold, but I like where I’m lying--
and then the train comes, howling, through the valley.
**this poem is a tribute to Leonard Cohen, as evidenced by the references to Famous Blue Raincoat, Paper Thin Hotel, and his rather unique singing voice.
xxx
Assignment: Write down a complete observable description of a real photograph. Write down two unknown facts. Write down one observable inference. Using this information, write a poem.
Psychophysics
What neither of us knew was that shortly our haptics would
forget us both, that
three weeks later the velour of feathers would be
familiar to us only in the way of our
dead grandmothers’ voices--diffused
across dull photographic distances.
Tactile stimulation ceased, then
audition, fading out in waves
we could no longer detect.
But even four senses down, divided
from olfaction, gustation, and the wise receptors of
the thalamus,
we could remember that day: the
green-bright hill, the Indian corn of chicken colours,
my bracelet flashing, your smile quirking,
and the visual process of rods and cones
that saved us from
solitude.
xxx
Assignment: Write a poem that uses simile.
Apitoxin
why are the ones who hurt the ones who
stay with you, i ask my mother
why do they keep humming around you like the last
wayward bees on extracted frames,
making you afraid to brush them off?
why aren’t you gone? i’ve
waited a long time to lose you.
why aren’t you gone?
but when i ask my mother she
only says that you’ve pressed your thumbprints
on my heart
like a suspect at the police station
and there’ll always be a record
you’re in the files
you’re in the frames
xxx
Assignment: Write a poem that uses metaphor.
Genesis
Why do poems travel in
the creases of the brain,
underground rivers carving
channels for themselves, carving
stalactites, caverns, chimneys,
for hundreds of miles of split-
second neural activity
until they well up from our
mouths and flow into
our hands, our history,
like water from the
earth?
Assignment: Write a poem using hard and soft sounds.
Trans
Most hot days I wish that I could crack that skin open
from inside
and climb out of it, drop
the dry wallpaper
and walk away from it--leave
it on the pavement.
If I stepped free from this false self,
if I slid whispering into my right gender,
if my smooth chin grew sparse hairs
and my voice fell two octaves down,
I could tell you I am not transforming
from one thing into another.
It was always me in here
enclosed in the wrong body, and
in these skirts and lipsticks
I have always been a
changeling.
xxx
Assignment: Write a poem using a made-up word. Do not define the word in the poem.
Paper Thin Hotel**
It’s four in the morning
the end of December,
the beginning of a better song by a better poet
but my heart feels gravel-rough, so
perhaps that’s enough for kinship
and I’m lying awake listening to the
gasps of fucking
from the couple next door,
thinking: at least they sound happy,
thinking: I could get drunk and forget this,
a cambrelin and a scotch at the bar
but then I’d have to readjust my eyes
to the light. Fuck that noise.
New York is cold, but I like where I’m lying--
and then the train comes, howling, through the valley.
**this poem is a tribute to Leonard Cohen, as evidenced by the references to Famous Blue Raincoat, Paper Thin Hotel, and his rather unique singing voice.
xxx
Assignment: Write down a complete observable description of a real photograph. Write down two unknown facts. Write down one observable inference. Using this information, write a poem.
Psychophysics
What neither of us knew was that shortly our haptics would
forget us both, that
three weeks later the velour of feathers would be
familiar to us only in the way of our
dead grandmothers’ voices--diffused
across dull photographic distances.
Tactile stimulation ceased, then
audition, fading out in waves
we could no longer detect.
But even four senses down, divided
from olfaction, gustation, and the wise receptors of
the thalamus,
we could remember that day: the
green-bright hill, the Indian corn of chicken colours,
my bracelet flashing, your smile quirking,
and the visual process of rods and cones
that saved us from
solitude.
xxx
Assignment: Write a poem that uses simile.
Apitoxin
why are the ones who hurt the ones who
stay with you, i ask my mother
why do they keep humming around you like the last
wayward bees on extracted frames,
making you afraid to brush them off?
why aren’t you gone? i’ve
waited a long time to lose you.
why aren’t you gone?
but when i ask my mother she
only says that you’ve pressed your thumbprints
on my heart
like a suspect at the police station
and there’ll always be a record
you’re in the files
you’re in the frames
xxx
Assignment: Write a poem that uses metaphor.
Genesis
Why do poems travel in
the creases of the brain,
underground rivers carving
channels for themselves, carving
stalactites, caverns, chimneys,
for hundreds of miles of split-
second neural activity
until they well up from our
mouths and flow into
our hands, our history,
like water from the
earth?
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Date: 2010-11-16 05:40 pm (UTC)I kind of totally stole the first two lines of that one, but. I like the sounds of it, too, so I'm glad you do!
Oh man, Dr. Goldstein and I spent so long on the last two lines of that excerpt. XD